You were dark
like a crisp November day
cold and beautiful and confident
touching me from the inside out
and oh how good it felt to have you in my head
to hear your voice call me baby
to hold your icy hands
knowing this could not last forever
but you were never meant to be permanent
Marvelous like November
Should I compare you to a winter’s day?
Reminds me of my last relationship
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I so much relate to this. Nice poem.
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Nkce. I could enjoy
like the new look on your page, and good write
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Nice little poem, Appreciated it!
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Nothing is permanent
None of us are permanent, though some words – like yours – echo eternity.
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Lovely ❤
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Longing and the reality so effectively communicated in few lines
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Succinctly lovely
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You’re welvome!
WoW!! beautiful…….loved it!!! 🙂 🙂
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my pleasure!! 🙂 🙂
Wow love this
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How pure, how lovely!
Keep writing. 💙