I used to feel an aching sorrow
in my chest
as if every mistake I had ever
made had been piled on top
of me
and although I have since been
relieved of that weight
I do no feel light
I do not feel free
Like a soaring bird heading
to find warmth
all I feel is anticipation
for a journey to a
destination I am still
uncertain of
and that is a weight
of its own
I really enjoy your writing. This one in particular reaches out with all it’s verbs and nouns, clutchs me.
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The future is always uncertain, but worrying about the future is the unnecessary weight. Peace!
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May God be with you in all your efforts.
Wonderful poem. Your future may be uncertain but I have found the journeys infinitely more interesting then the destinations.
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I could feel your words …I had the same feeling once but still I must say beautiful written ❤
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Lovely! I had a chat with a friend recently about the character of anticipation and how it differed from expectation. I like your use of it here.
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This deeply beautiful.
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You’re a wonderful woman, you made all my days so fantastic especially when reading your blog
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How did you relieve yourself of the weight? I could use some advice… perhaps it is a “caruso” thing… 🙂
It just took time and a lot of effort to better myself and distance myself from certain things and people who were clearly not good for my well being. And perhaps it is 🙂
Very beautiful 🙂
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I felt your words, deep and meaningful 😘
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The weight of brightness and being, wanting
This is beautiful! Iam glad that Iam following you! Your blog is luuurve!!! ❤
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I’m glad you were able to shed that weight, but that feeling of still not being free (know it all to well) is perfectly captured in the end. For you, as well for all others,:
Peace in the struggle
to find peace
comfort on the way
to comfort
(Pierre Marchand and Sarah Mclachlan)
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Ah, man. Preach on, sister. I completely relate.
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Reblogged this on The Young Novelist.
Good work.
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I understand! Thank you for sharing!!
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Wonderful poem –
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And what a weight it can be. Thank you for sharing your burden and your lightness in spite of it all. Wonderful imagery too 🙂
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hey there! 😀
You’ve got a nice blog here 🙂
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reminds me of that song lyric “got a crown on my head, and the world on my shoulders.”
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Great writing! I hope you find your destination! 🙂
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I SO relate to this–well written.
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Most welcome.
Bravo!
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Hi rejectreality. I have found to take a day at a time not expect anything. Remember you are are as good as anybody else. And confidently face the world. You will be fine and keep writing. Thank you so much for liking my poem A Voice Called! Peace and Best wishes. The Foureyed Poet
I 100% relate to this daily feeling. There’s comfort in knowing I’m not the only one. Thank you for sharing these words 🙂
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Very interesting… But don’t worry about the future… Enjoy the present…
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Beautifully said…your words sit with me and keep me company..
Thank you! I’m glad
Welcome 🙂