There is a disease that has consumed me
A disease some might call love
Others, infatuation
Yet this foolishness
This gambling of emotions
Is only ever temporary
Soul mate is a rather nonsensical term
And all you ever did for me
Was make my stomach ache
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This is a great poem! Love it.
Thank you!
Ouch…
… or did I miss something?
I dont think so?
Excellent!
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Short, specific and simple – perfect, I like. Can I get permission to do my own version please.
Thanks! And as long as its your own work you can do whatever you want
so poignant and universal, well done
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Your poem really makes your reader pause and reflect especially on broken love Your work is outstanding..
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I have had a few of those tummy aches 😛
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Most Welcome!
Nice touch with the closing line!!!
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sure thing!
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Yes…those stomach aches. “And all you ever did for me Was make my stomach ache” I actually smiled…very truthful…real.
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You’re welcome.
Known disease but no easy cure invented.I must say again- take care.
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