Sometimes caring can be dangerous
A treacherous minefield full of broken hearts
That never seems to have an escape route
A gut-wrenching calamity of an inner struggle
That consumes your entire being
Until you are engulfed in agony
But perhaps it is better to hurt than to feel nothing at all
Perhaps it is only beneficial to take great risks and gamble with your heart
In order to find the one thing that everyone spends their whole lives searching for:
Love.
Have you found yours ?
No need to reply
or even cry.
Wow, really moving! Love the concept and the flow. Great work! Keep it up! =)
Thank you so much
Beautiful, I really like it!
Thank you!
We all seek love, even when we hide from the possibility of it, it is not for fear of love itself, but out of fear for losing it. Beautiful piece, I loved the touch of hope in the last verse, it made the melancholy of the first two all the more poignant. Thank you for this.
No, thank you! 🙂
good stuff here!
Thank you
Engulfed in agony.
I really enjoyed the word picture here. Thanks for the good post
Thanks for reading!
It is absolutely worth it.
I’m sort of a silent admirer of your work. It’s not that I’m a voyeur! I just read your words and they stun me. They leave me speechless. I’m learning from you. 🙂
Thank you so much! 🙂